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Trainer sprite-- need CnC

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1--- Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:13 pm

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
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Spoiler:
Trainer sprite-- need CnC Trainer

Done in the style of trainer sprites from the pokemon games, although she is a little taller.
So yeah, need CnC.

General things I need help to improve on:
The shoes
The eyes
The hair

I referenced different sprites but it's entirely from scratch. With a frigging trackball mouse. ._.' I think on some level I must be a sort of masochist.


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2--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:16 pm

Clover

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very nice for a completely scratched sprite!

I agree the eyes and hair could use some touching up, but the shoes honestly look ok to me.

The style of the pokemon game definitely shines through (especially in the outlining of the jeans, how it isn't just a solid color line)

If I had to say anything, maybe the eyes could be more defined? Like I'm not sure where it begins and ends type thing. (could be fixed with more shadow under or over the eyes maybe?)

Just something you'll have to play around with I guess!

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3--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:50 am

Guest

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I agree with you.. This one is really nice.. I really like to read this....

4--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:36 am

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
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kethal wrote:I really like to read this....

...What?


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Trainer sprite-- need CnC Jenna
Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

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5--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:50 pm

Friday

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I think she doesn't speak english and is using google translator. Ugh. Anyway, i think I could help you on the eyes. I'm pretty okay at them. :3


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6--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:01 pm

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
Team Rocket
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That's the point though, I don't want any help making it. I want to do it completely on my own. I just need help with how to fix the mistakes.


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Trainer sprite-- need CnC Jenna
Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

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7--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:07 pm

Friday

Friday
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Well, with the eyes, you must make the top eye lids actually visible. I don't really know why, it just looks better. Also, smaller eyes that involve maybe a 2x2 pixel square look realistic. Also, the skin seems kind of light, maybe you should darken it?


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8--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:11 pm

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
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She's supposed to be pale.

Also, the goal of this was to make her into a trainer... Look at any other sprite, their eyes are literally all the damn same. >.>
I'm thinking of adding lashes or something like Cynthia's, but then it'd look like she's wearing makeup, and makeup is stupid. :c


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Trainer sprite-- need CnC Jenna
Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

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9--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:54 pm

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
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(also she already has eyelids)

Double-post, baww.

Edited the hair a bit.
Spoiler:
Trainer sprite-- need CnC Trainer-1


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Trainer sprite-- need CnC Jenna
Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

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10--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:26 pm

Friday

Friday
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Maybe you should make the eye look the other way. I mean her entire body is facing that way, but the eyes aren't.


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11--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:34 pm

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
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it's funny because everything is facing to the right


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Trainer sprite-- need CnC Jenna
Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

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http://md427.deviantart.com/

12--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:02 pm

Friday

Friday
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The hair confuses me.


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13--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:34 pm

Nellie Lovett

Nellie Lovett
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no u.


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Trainer sprite-- need CnC Jenna
Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

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14--- Re: Trainer sprite-- need CnC on Tue Jan 18, 2011 10:10 pm

Goldenrod

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It's really good looking, but the shape of her head is a little weird. I can't really tell which way her head is facing, but that could also be because of the hair.


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