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1happy My teams sucks... Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:23 pm

boy from asension

boy from asension
Knight
Knight

Ok heres the team:
Raichu (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Static
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Dig
- Thunderbolt
- Thunder
- Shock Wave

Lanturn (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 224 HP / 255 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Blizzard
- Charge Beam
- Hydro Pump
- Signal Beam

Magnezone @ Life Orb
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Magnet Bomb
- Explosion
- Thunderbolt
- Zap Cannon

Ampharos (M) @ Wise Glasses
Trait: Static
EVs: 128 HP / 128 Atk / 124 SAtk / 128 Spd
Naughty Nature (+Atk, -SDef)
- Fire Punch
- Thunder
- DynamicPunch
- Focus Blast

Rotom-C @ Miracle Seed
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 96 HP / 156 SAtk / 255 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Leaf Storm
- Charge Beam
- Toxic
- Ominous Wind

Electivire (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Motor Drive
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Earthquake
- Flamethrower
- Signal Beam
- Thunderbolt


Please don't just put great or awfull. Please either post what you like or what could be improved also as you can see this is electric only. Please don't post that I need another type. Wink

2happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:18 am

Paradox

Paradox
Pokémon Master
Pokémon Master

Alright, I'll help you the best I can.

With Raichu, having three attacks of the same type is bad, so you could have Grass Knot on it instead since you are running a Special set. I've got one if you need one. Dig is alright, but I can see it surprising a lot of people, so it's all cool.

Lanturn looks decent. You could add 28 or 31 EVs in Special Attack, but Blizzard's meh accuracy scares me. With Charge Beam increasing the Sp. Attack, Ice Beam could be better. I have an Ice Beam if you need one. Very Happy

Magnezone is alright, although I would change Zap Cannon into something else. Thunder Wave would be nice since it has meh speed, and I have one if you need one.

Ampharos is alright. Thunder and DynamicPunch's accuracy scares me, so changing Thunder to Thunderbolt or Discharge would be cool and DynamicPunch to... something like Cotton Spore or Power Gem.

Rotom's pretty good. Ominous Wind could be changed to Shadow Ball, but if Lady Luck loves you, you could be in an awesome position. Toxic is nice, although Will-O-Wisp could be handier. I've got one if you need one.

Electivire, the pride and joy of your team. Overall, it looks nice, but a Gliscor can easily block it like a brick wall. Adding Ice Punch to it might be beneficial even if it doesn't have Attack EVs.

If you could explain why you chose these moves, it will help me better. And my offers of giving you TMs is open anytime, dude. Smile

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3happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:36 am

boy from asension

boy from asension
Knight
Knight

Wow great thanks man!
With most of the moves I was just trying to get good combos.
I agree with all you said about the accuary and have the same types. Thanks so much for taking the time to post and I'll try out all you've said so thanks for spending the time to give me some advise!

he's the eited team: Raichu (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Raichu (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Static
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Dig
- Thunderbolt
- Thunder
- Grass Knot

Lanturn (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 28 SAtk / 224 SDef / 255 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Ice Beam
- Charge Beam
- Hydro Pump
- Signal Beam

Magnezone @ Life Orb
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 120 SAtk / 192 SDef / 196 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Magnet Bomb
- Explosion
- Thunderbolt
- Thunder Wave

Ampharos (M) @ Wise Glasses
Trait: Static
EVs: 128 HP / 128 Atk / 124 SAtk / 128 Spd
Naughty Nature (+Atk, -SDef)
- Fire Punch
- Discharge
- Power Gem
- Focus Blast

Rotom-C @ Miracle Seed
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Leaf Storm
- Charge Beam
- Will-O-Wisp
- Shadow Ball

Electivire (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Motor Drive
EVs: 252 SAtk / 255 Spd
Hardy Nature
- Earthquake
- Flamethrower
- Ice Punch
- Thunderbolt



Last edited by boy from asension on Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:49 am; edited 1 time in total

4happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:17 am

Paradox

Paradox
Pokémon Master
Pokémon Master

Heh, looking good, man! I'm glad I helped! Very Happy

http://www.skorgro.com/

5happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:14 am

boy from asension

boy from asension
Knight
Knight

Paradox wrote:Heh, looking good, man! I'm glad I helped! Very Happy
So am I!

6happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:13 pm

Clover

Clover
Admin
Admin

Now you just gotta test it out :3!

You might want to have back up items for your pokémon to use in case you ever come across a 'no duplicate item' rule though.

http://www.sweetcharm.net

7happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:43 pm

ThisGuy

ThisGuy
Pokémon Champion
Pokémon Champion

Clover wrote:Now you just gotta test it out :3!

You might want to have back up items for your pokémon to use in case you ever come across a 'no duplicate item' rule though.

Yeah, a focus sash could come in real handy at times.

8happy Re: My teams sucks... Fri Dec 31, 2010 11:35 pm

boy from asension

boy from asension
Knight
Knight

Ok thanks I'm testing it out and most of the pokemon are much better it's just my rotom and Lanturn that need work they can't stand the hits or do the damage any idea's?

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